The first of Watzlawick’s five axioms of communication is “One cannot not communicate”. Because every behaviour is a kind of communication, people who are aware of each other are constantly communicating. Any perceivable behaviour, including the absence of action, has the potential to be interpreted by other people as having some meaning.
On the web, you are your website. Your website (you) communicates with visitors, who in turn try and communicate with it (you again). As in real life, sometimes there are breakdowns in communication, and the message doesn’t come across clearly. Here are some things to watch for…
Too much wewe talk. Not talk of small or diminutive things, or anything inappropriate – it’s talk about you. Your company. What you have done. Why you’re great. Why I, if I was smart, would buy from you.
This type of copy is a killer. People respond more effectively to copy that talks about them, talks to them, solves their problem. Copy that lacks a strong customer focus will lose visitors quickly. If you mention your customers (you, your, yours) at least 2 times more than you mention yourself (we, I, company name), you’ll be doing well. Don’t hurt yourself by checking manually though, use the We We Calculator from Future Now. I scored 65% customer focused (alright, enough about me). I challenge all of you to do better!
Too much jargon and meaningless corporate-speak.
Yes, we all get it. Your company is poised on the edge of several strong vertical markets, and ready to leverage new media and web 2.0 technologies to blow away existing old world dynamics and surge forward with new synergies and exciting, action driven initiatives.
Except nobody (except for looney tunes executives who don’t know what they actually want) really talks that way, and nobody likes being talked to that way. You would be better off to say “We like all the new technology out there and are looking forward to incorporating platforms like Twitter and Facebook and using audio and video on the web to allow us to communicate with our visitors better.”
Fight the Bull is an extension for MS Office (works in Open Office as well) that analyzes your content for heavy jargon and meaningless speech.
Too many typefaces. There can be only one.
I’ve been reading about type lately, two good books – one is called “Stop Stealing Sheep and Learn How Type Works”. The other is called “Designing with Type”. I like fonts and typefaces, both are important to communication as some typefaces convey trust while other can convey doubt. Without getting into it too deeply (because I will later), conventional wisdom tells us that we should use no more than three typefaces at a time. One typeface for the main headline; one for the copy; one for sub headings.
The colours, ooooooh the colours.
Your main font should be one colour, something close to black or dark gray. Your background should be slightly off white. Line spacing and letter spacing should make your copy easy to read. If you must use colours in your fonts, or on your website, use them sparingly. It’s not a circus tent, after all, it’s your business and unless your business supplies flashing coloured lights and tie dyed clothing, you should probably keep it toned down.
If you can’t write, hire someone who can.
Some people are great writers. Some people write by smashing their fingers on the keyboard in rapid succession. At least, that’s what it seems like when I read some of the copy out there. I’m always amazed by the care and attention people pay to the graphic properties of a website and to what lengths they’ll go to get something ‘perfect’ and how little they seem to care about their copy. Don’t spend $4000 on a website and follow it up with amateur hour copy. A great writer will work with you to craft your site’s copy, perfect a tone of voice and attitude and, most importantly, make sure grammar and spelling are consistent and correct.
Coming soon = Leaving now
If you have a page that says “coming soon, please check back later for updates”, that tells me one of a couple of things. First, that you wanted this great website and maybe underestimated the time an effort it takes to write copy. If the “coming soon” persists, I’m going to assume that you no longer care about your website. If that’s the case, why should I or anybody else care?
These leaps in logic may be fallacious, but perception is everything. If you can’t finish them, hire someone to. If you can’t do that, unpublish them. If you don’t want to do that, believing that the “content helps for search engine rankings”, I’ll be blunt and say, all you’re doing is showing people what looks like a strip mall with half the stores empty. Empty pages, optimized or not, aren’t going to help you.
Anything else?
Plenty, stay tuned during communication week at Harbour City SEO for more communication tips and tools. Ciao for now!